Thursday, January 10, 2008

A love story to share

He saw her eyes closing and her eyelids seemed too heavy to open again. Looking at her placid yet charming face, he knew he had fallen in love with her. She wasn't having a pair of beautiful big eyes, neither a well-shaped countenance and lustrous straight hair. But for him, she was the prettiest among the prettiest girls. He loved her, and he knew that. He promised to protect her forever, but he failed to do so. She was lying on the bed in a hospital ward. She had met with an accident and he was not there. He felt so guilty but what could he do? Besides loving her, what else had he done for her? He never hold her hands even when she intended to do so. He never gave her a birthday present except just wishing her at 12am in the midnight. Most importantly, he had never told her that he loved her.

He touched her fingers and lifted her right hand up. He looked at her sleeping face which seemed not going to wake up anymore, and whispered in her ear softly, 'I love you...', with tears secretly rolling down from the edges of his eyes along his cheeks...

Love, began to fill the entire spaces of the hospital ward, between two lovers who were destined to part with each other and suffer in the end of the story.



**erm...how you think about this story? I know it's not really interesting and romantic...but at least this is my first masterpiece of love story(haha! so much more to be improved! =P) actually, i wrote this story last saturday when i was waiting for the undang test(had been waiting for 7 to 8 hours huh...stupid stupid stupid! wasted my precious time), and finally i passed...46/50...considered ok i suppose...going for the amali theory course tomorrow(hope i dont have to wait for so long anymore tomorrow) +)

2 comments:

Kite said...

not bad wo...

keke...

Got experience leh, full with emotion~~

JaMie said...

no la...just tat i was suddenly inspired...not because of experience! =P